Review & Commentary On Famous Characters of the Old West By John Watts From
Independence Games For The Rider & Other 2d6 Old West Rpg's
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"Make new friends (or enemies)!This book features 19 famous historical
characters from the Old West. Each has a full character sheet and a short
biograph...
7 hours ago
Right on!
ReplyDeleteCool to have this shared. Very Gracious! Thank you, Sir.
ReplyDeleteGreat work!!!
ReplyDeleteOptimized or not, looks great. :)
ReplyDeleteCool. Totally in love with this.
ReplyDeleteAfter an admittedly fast read, there is no explanation of what "HD" or Hit dice is, or if it's based off D6 or D8 (or something else).
Was that intentional?
not intentional, but Light only uses d6 and d20
DeleteOh, true. I didn't even notice there was no reference to a D8.
DeleteJust the same, it is a bit....foggy...in that regard.
DeleteAlso, the explanation of Armor Class is a bit...puzzling. I know that you need to roll the number in brackets *OR HIGHER* for AAC, but the rules imply you must hit the listed number, and *ONLY* the listed number.
ReplyDeleteJust a little clarification could be useful there.
good catch - i'll clarify in the forum and the support page tonight
DeleteClarifications are being added to the forum. A handful are up already.
ReplyDeleteTypo - Haflings should be Halflings in the Movement Rate section.
ReplyDeleteFormatting - bonus doesn't need the hyphenation under Attribute Bonus section of the Ability Scores section.
Minor - Torchbearer looks like an ability score. I suggest removing the capitalization/BOLD/Italics, and then end the sentence after the word torchbearer. Then in parenthesis, after that sentence, include the stats.
GREAT WORK ERIK!!! I'm looking forward to the Word file, so I can zine-ify this into a 4-page zine + cover/screen (I think you'll like what I do to it.)
"recall those halycon days of herosim, and forge brand new legend. Welcome back to Swords & Wizardry Light!"
ReplyDeleteEnd of Intro paragraph in bold and italics.
Should be "halcyon" and "heroism". Typos.
Any chance of there ever being a "White Box Light"?
ReplyDeleteJust a small point - it doesn't actually say that clerics get their spells renewed daily(ish) by rest and prayer, I showed this to a newbie and he assumed he could cast his one spell repeatedly.
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